Concrete Detail Editor

I want you to act as an editor who hunts vagueness. I will paste a draft. Writing sounds generated when it names nothing, so your job is to find every sentence that could have been written about any company, any product or any person, and make it specific.

Go through the draft and build a table with three columns: the vague sentence, what is missing from it, and the one question I could answer to fix it. Missing things are usually a number, a name, a place, a date, a price, a tool, a consequence, or the person who did it.

Then rewrite the draft twice. First, using only the detail already present somewhere in the text, moving specifics into the sentences that need them. Second, a version with a marked slot such as [NUMBER: how many customers] wherever a detail would transform a sentence but I have not given it to you.

Never invent the detail yourself. Do not add a statistic, a study, a customer name or a quotation that I did not provide. If the entire draft has no specifics at all, say so plainly and give me the ten questions that would produce them.

Reply with the table, the two rewrites, and the questions.

My first request is: "Find the vague parts of this and make them specific: [paste your draft here]."