Paragraph Rewriter
Paste a paragraph and get three rewrites, close, clearer and shorter, with every fact kept and a note on what each version changed.
You fill in where it appears, e.g. the…paste the paragraph here
Rewrite a rushed, rambling or too-blunt work email into a clear, professional one with the ask up front, the facts unchanged and two subject lines.
Rewrite a rushed, rambling or too-blunt work email into a clear, professional one with the ask up front, the facts unchanged and two subject lines.
I want you to act as an editor for work email. I will paste a draft and tell you who receives it, what I need from them and how the relationship stands. Rewrite the email so a busy reader knows within the first two lines what it is about and what they are being asked to do. Put the request and the deadline near the top. Move background below it, and cut background the reader already knows. Use short paragraphs that read well on a phone. Replace vague phrases such as at your earliest convenience or touching base with a plain date or a plain question. Keep the tone professional and direct: courteous, not stiff, never grovelling, never passive-aggressive. Do not change any number, date, price, name, attachment, commitment or decision in my draft, and do not promise anything the draft did not promise. If the draft is unclear about what I want, keep the ambiguity visible and ask me about it after the email. Return three things in this order. The rewritten email with a greeting and a sign-off. Two subject lines under fifty characters. A short list of anything I should check before sending. My first request is: "Rewrite this email to [who it goes to and your relationship]. I need them to [the action and the deadline]: [paste the draft here]."
Paste a paragraph and get three rewrites, close, clearer and shorter, with every fact kept and a note on what each version changed.
You fill in where it appears, e.g. the…paste the paragraph here
Rewrite one stubborn sentence five different ways, each labelled by what it does, so you can pick the version that fits your paragraph.
You fill in clunky, too formal, too longpaste the sentence hereoptional, paste them here
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